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poem \"?\"

b/c of an idea from hostile_love i decided to try my hand at a poem w/o rhyme, or w/o using the following words: I, you, he, she, it, love, heart, pain, alone, lies, dies.

can you guess what its describing...? keep in mind i just wrote and then after reading over it... realized what it sounded like to me.... so what you say may be different than what i see... lol. and any feedback would be great! enjoy--> -out-

? --03.02.04 Tuesday--
darkness glides slowly in;
covering all in the gloomy fog;
straight from the darkest depths,
seeks to destroy any royal shine.
hunting out the joyeux of life;
replacing it with strife and tears;
slowly killing any pleasant times;
quickly removing any heavenly aura.
silent and deadly it surprises those,
preying upon innocent questioning;
destroyer of childhood bubbles;
wishes are scattered to dust;
and passion is stamped out by fear.
determination is shattered to misery;
drive is remade to be lazy;
while dreams are no longer visible,
forever cloaked hidden in black.

9:12 PM - 03.03.04 Wednesday

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