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poem \"Untitled-- Jan. 29th, 2004\"

as you can see... this poem is "untitled" and i'm thinking of naming it "doubts" or something along those lines... if you have any suggestions... please let me know! just leave me a note/email... thnx!

Untitled --01.29.04 Thursday--
Silent tears fall.
Filled with fears,
She weeps.
Weeping for all their doubts,
She can't see through the negative,
Can't see the positive of bounds and leaps.
Like a virus it spreads,
All throughout her head,
Making her second-guess her choices.
Am I happy?
Am I sure?
Is this really worth it?
Minutes previous she was ready,
She could have taken on the world;
But now she succoms to their doubts;
Faith slips away as if nonexistent,
She rattles her brain for reasons to be persistent;
But her gloom allows her to find none.
She wants to do what's best for her,
But now that's something she doesn't know.
As she sends a silent plea,
Praying for some help to see,
That her life truly is worth her while.
Silent tears stall,
Replacing themselves with doubt;
All she wants is to fall,
But knows that will never happen beyond a doubt.
And so she curls up to sleep away the pain,
Knowing that it will only be greater when she's sane.

7:52 PM - 02.04.04 Wednesday

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